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other worlds ch. 1

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                    Raging, the ball of fire threw itself over the hill and out of sight. Being here was strange. I was used to the sun drifting slowly down over the fresh waters, kissing them for the innocent blush of pinky red before finally disappearing.
          "Yoo ire needed. Keng's request." Yvonne called from the doorway. Her accent made her words barely audible, but I managed to gage her intent.
          I ripped my gaze away from the shadows of the trees atop the mountains, and followed. As I entered the castle, I was again awestruck by the danger lurking inside. No-one seemed aware or bothered about the crumbling bricks.
         "Zis way yang Stan. Ze keng's chambers ire zis way." I followed Yvonne down the stone corridor, unable to stop my eyes drifting down to her leather-clad butt. She was a sexy woman, but as we walked I saw hardly any heads turn her way. This was one way to see I was away from home because most men wouldn't be keeping the distance I am, which isn't much, from her.
         "Erm…excuse me Y…Yvonne. But erm… nobodies really answered my question yet," I dared say nothing else for fear of what this woman could do.
         "I pdromise yoo nou anseirs, but whet is it yoo wesh to know?" it took me a while to decipher her words but I got there eventually.
         "Well, where am I?" this seemed like a logical question to lead with.
         "yoo ire in Shonclauie. We ire the Shon people. Enething elsse?" She turned and raised an eyebrow, daring me to ask something else.
         "Yeah. See, I've never heard of your country or people before so could you be a bit more broad?" Her squint told me she knew not of what I was referring. "Y'know, Asia, Europe, a continent.
         "I aim a trvler yit I av nver herd of zes places. Yoo mast ixpleen" She is waiting for words that I am unsure of. How can she be unaware of countries, continents…what do I say to her patient gaze, her not so patient leg tapping? I have no idea.
        "I'll explain later. Lets go see your king first." I hope against God this will be enough to silence those taps, because they are getting faster-along with my heart rate.
        "Fiine. Yoo will expleen zis laater," And with that she spun on her heal and marched on.
just started writing this because i wanted to show two contrasting sunsets. think i will carry on and write more chapters...see how it goes.
is the accent to much?
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